Hi Ana, great story! Are foxes your favourite animal? I like how you've used capital letters and fullstops correctly. I wonder what you'll write about next?
Hi Ana, what a fantastic story you have written. I really like foxes too. They remind me of when I was a little girl and lived on a farm in Germany, we used to have to be vey careful walking to school because they lived in our paddocks. Do you have any pets?
What a cool story. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteHi Ana, great story! Are foxes your favourite animal? I like how you've used capital letters and fullstops correctly. I wonder what you'll write about next?
ReplyDeleteHi Ana, what a fantastic story you have written. I really like foxes too. They remind me of when I was a little girl and lived on a farm in Germany, we used to have to be vey careful walking to school because they lived in our paddocks. Do you have any pets?
ReplyDeleteNice writing I also like foxes
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