Hi Kiearn, I really enjoyed listening to your creative story about Picky Peter. I could really hear your writers voice and I thought you used great expression when reading your story. I have a question for you about Picky Peter, after the shower and bath drowned him did he still smell like a 100 year old junk yard?
Hi Kieran, What a great story! Well done, I like how you read your story with lots of expression. Which David Walliams story has been your favourite so far?
Hi Kieran - you really have been inspired by David Walliams haven't you? Love your descriptive language and the way you read your story with fabulous expression.Have you shared this with your brother too? Mrs Hefferman
Hi Kieran I really loved your story, you described Peter so well. Is it inspired from the World's Worst Children? I love them stories. Have you read The World's Worst Teachers? Michelle
Hi Kieran, I just loved your story because I really love David Walliams. My favourite David Walliam's story is Grandpa's Great Escape, which is your favourite?
Hi Kiearn, I really enjoyed listening to your creative story about Picky Peter. I could really hear your writers voice and I thought you used great expression when reading your story. I have a question for you about Picky Peter, after the shower and bath drowned him did he still smell like a 100 year old junk yard?
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Hi Kieran, What a great story! Well done, I like how you read your story with lots of expression. Which David Walliams story has been your favourite so far?
ReplyDeleteHi Kieran - you really have been inspired by David Walliams haven't you? Love your descriptive language and the way you read your story with fabulous expression.Have you shared this with your brother too? Mrs Hefferman
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ReplyDeleteI really loved your story, you described Peter so well. Is it inspired from the World's Worst Children? I love them stories. Have you read The World's Worst Teachers?
Michelle
Hi Kieran, I just loved your story because I really love David Walliams. My favourite David Walliam's story is Grandpa's Great Escape, which is your favourite?
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