Today I have written a funny story about Batman I hope you like it. I have also read a book played prodigy and I rode my bike outside next I am going to try and make a puzzle.
Hey Dayzharn, great writing! I found your story quite funny. You have a great imagination to write stories like this. Well done! Sounds like you've had a busy day. I'm excited to see the puzzle that you're going to make!
Hey Dayzharn, I laughed out loud when I read the part about batman wearing spotty undies, instead of his batman mask. Sounds like you have been really busy.
Ahiahi marie Dayzharn, It sounds like you are keeping really busy in your bubble. I really enjoyed reading your story and I have to agree with the other teachers it has a really funny ending. You are very creative. Ka pai tō mahi!
Great story Dayzharn, 'spotty undies', how embarrassing. It reminded me of when I went out with odd shoes on. Not quite as embarrassing as Batman's undies on your head, but it made me go red when someone noticed. Keep up with the great stories I really enjoyed reading it. Michelle
Hi Dayzharn. I just read your story and I really enjoyed it! Such a great twist at the end. I really liked your simile 'pouring out like a smoothie', what fantastic writing. Keep up the great work! Mrs Wales
Hey Dayzharn - What a cool story! I really enjoyed the ending - it was a bit of a surprise. Glad you managed to get out and ride your bike today.
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thanks mr g Im happy that I rode my bike i went down a small hill on my lawn
DeleteHey Dayzharn, great writing! I found your story quite funny. You have a great imagination to write stories like this. Well done! Sounds like you've had a busy day. I'm excited to see the puzzle that you're going to make!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mrs Walker yeah Im gonnna make the puzzle tomorrow I dont have time
DeleteHey Dayzharn, I laughed out loud when I read the part about batman wearing spotty undies, instead of his batman mask. Sounds like you have been really busy.
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ha ha i laughed to when I wrote it
DeleteAhiahi marie Dayzharn, It sounds like you are keeping really busy in your bubble. I really enjoyed reading your story and I have to agree with the other teachers it has a really funny ending. You are very creative. Ka pai tō mahi!
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yes i am very busy especially today thanks whaea Bonnie
DeleteGreat story Dayzharn, 'spotty undies', how embarrassing. It reminded me of when I went out with odd shoes on. Not quite as embarrassing as Batman's undies on your head, but it made me go red when someone noticed. Keep up with the great stories I really enjoyed reading it.
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Thanks Michelle i think it would be embarrassing to wear odd shoes on the night out
DeleteHi Dayzharn. I just read your story and I really enjoyed it! Such a great twist at the end. I really liked your simile 'pouring out like a smoothie', what fantastic writing. Keep up the great work! Mrs Wales
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs wales thank you i put the simile because i just felt like it
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